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Post by blooper on Jul 4, 2008 14:58:32 GMT -5
Army:- Blooper Army General:- Blooper King Captain:- Blooper Devil (Gaint red blooper with a pitchfork and devil tail) Messenger:- Mini Blooper Devil (Small Blooper Devil)
Base:- Blooper Castle (Under water Castle close to Atlantis) ;D
Troops:- 250 Bloopers 150 Gaint Cheep Cheeps (Big Cheep Cheeps) 100 Electiric Bloopers (Electric resistent, yellow bloopers with shocking powers) 100 Fire Bloopers (Fire resistent,red bloopers with flaming powers) 200 Gaint Bloopers (Big Bloopers) 200 Ice Bloopers (Ice resistent, Lite blue bloopers with freezing powers) 250 Flying Bloopers (Fast, Bloopers with wings) 250 Stone Bloopers (Slow,Bloopers made of rock) 25 Cheep Cheeps
Total:- 1525
Alliances:- None Wars:- None
Base Defences:- Blooper Squirters - Shoots Tons of water at incoming enemies Blooper Gate - Need Blooper or Cheep Cheep hand print to open
Research 1. Add Bullet Bill Cannons to the Defence (Fires Bullet Bills at intruders) - 20 days 2. Create a Koopa Troopa Recruitment Center (Allows Koopa Troopas to be made) - 15 days 3. 4.
Completed Projects:- None
LOG:_ King Blooper: Bloop-Boop beep boop bop bep bloop.
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Makajawan
SMKW God of the Wars
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Post by Makajawan on Jul 4, 2008 15:11:25 GMT -5
Just a few things.
For one, you only start with 1250, and you have 1525. That needs to be fixed.
Also, it says your base is underwater, and you have water shooters. I assume these generate a current, correct? Not an issue, just my lack of understanding.
While on the subject of base defenses, your gate should be destructible. As it is a starting defense, it can't be too strong, so it will come down. Not right away, but it will come down.
Also, you are allowed 5 project slots, not just four. I would suggest that you use all 5 too, as projects are quite valuable.
Finally, make sure that you translate the log into English. The log details your accomplishments so we know what is happening. You are certainly allowed to write it in "bloopese," but please translate it as well. Just put the translated form in parentheses after the regular form.
Other than that, I'd say it's good. A mod should approve it shortly.
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Post by blooper on Jul 4, 2008 15:26:47 GMT -5
Army:- Blooper Army General:- Blooper King Captain:- Blooper Devil (Gaint red blooper with a pitchfork and devil tail) Messenger:- Mini Blooper Devil (Small Blooper Devil)
Base:- Blooper Castle (Castle on a island, close to a blooper city)
Troops:- 250 Bloopers 150 Gaint Cheep Cheeps (Big Cheep Cheeps) 350 Electiric Bloopers (Electric resistent, yellow bloopers with shocking powers) 350 Fire Bloopers (Fire resistent,red bloopers with flaming powers) 100 Gaint Bloopers (Big Bloopers) 100 Ice Bloopers (Ice resistent, Lite blue bloopers with freezing powers) 200 Flying Bloopers (Fast, Bloopers with wings) 200 Stone Bloopers (Slow,Bloopers made of rock)
Total:- 1750
Alliances:- None Wars:- None
Base Defences:- Blooper Squirters - Shoots Tons of water at incoming enemies Blooper Gate - Need Blooper or Cheep Cheep hand print to open
Research 1. Add Bullet Bill Cannons to the Defence (Fires Bullet Bills at intruders) - 16 days 2. Create a Koopa Troopa Recruitment Center (Allows Koopa Troopas to be made) - 11 days 3. Create a extra castle underwater (To escape to if needed to during a war) - 41 Days 4. Recruit 50 Winged Goombas - 20 Days 5.
Completed Projects:- None
LOG:_ King Blooper: Bloop-Boop beep boop bop bep bloop.( Bloop Boop is ready.)
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Post by vidguysteve on Jul 4, 2008 15:49:53 GMT -5
I miss Pikmin Monkey... Welcome to the game!
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Makajawan
SMKW God of the Wars
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He's a Pirate
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Post by Makajawan on Jul 4, 2008 16:01:41 GMT -5
I miss Pikmin Monky... Welcome to the game! FIX'D
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Post by blooper on Jul 4, 2008 17:11:45 GMT -5
I made a few adjustments
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Post by vidguysteve on Jul 4, 2008 21:05:00 GMT -5
HOLD UP!
Sorry, but you can't increase the number of anything that you obtain daily. Sorry, but project #4 needs to go before you start.
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Post by blooper on Jul 4, 2008 22:47:53 GMT -5
Ok deleted!
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Post by vidguysteve on Jul 5, 2008 11:34:50 GMT -5
Alright, you're all good to join SMKW! Make a topic in the Logbook Library section and that's where you'll post your logs, and then copy your log and post it in the Main Board.
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