Mr.Makutawsome
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Post by Mr.Makutawsome on Sept 16, 2008 14:28:43 GMT -5
So...
Is this going to happen or what?
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Post by vidguysteve on Sept 16, 2008 14:29:53 GMT -5
If it is, we're going to need a new mod, since Yoshisoul is moving to Europe and probably won't be back for a while.
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Mr.Makutawsome
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Post by Mr.Makutawsome on Sept 16, 2008 15:00:35 GMT -5
Hey, Petey? Could you mod this battle?
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Post by vidguysteve on Sept 16, 2008 17:29:37 GMT -5
Yeah, he's gonna read it here. Make a topic.
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kaka
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Post by kaka on Sept 24, 2008 19:10:22 GMT -5
Eh, I think I'll put the update here.
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Post by kaka on Sept 24, 2008 19:28:04 GMT -5
Magical Might
Base: Sorcery Tower (Original Place, Located on the outskirts of Toad Town) Troops: 1250 Uber Troops Civilians: 26,700 (+ 100 a day) Coins: 23,400. (+100 a day) Bandits: Merlar, Merlee, Merlon, Merluvlee, Merle Spokesperson: Merlow Allies: Patron:
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He doesn't have a troops section either...
I can't start until someone tells me what I should do about this. SHould I just ignore them in the battle, or what?
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Post by kaka on Sept 24, 2008 19:29:17 GMT -5
Oh, he replied. K, I'll get started now.
EDIT: It's too late now. I'll try to get it today, but most likely tommorow.
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Post by vidguysteve on Sept 24, 2008 20:16:31 GMT -5
Just for future references, yeah, you ignore them in the post, but they still die.
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Post by kaka on Sept 25, 2008 16:08:19 GMT -5
The Breaching Of The Tower
The tower stood tall, outlined in the sky. Inside, there was the most potent of magical forces. Who would be foolish enough to attack? Three people. A crazy mechanic. A Shy Guy. And a Goomba. They all had different purposes. Lash was there for the money. The Shy guy was there for the artifacts. And the Goomba was there to blow stuff up. Goomboss’s troops took the front lines, the Shy Guys forces spread out randomly, with Sniper guys hiding in random places, and a few were on top of the tank, and a huge tank was behind all of them. Goomboss was giving his troops a pep talk. “Look at those namby-pamby fellows in robes! Prancing around with little sticks! They deserve to DIE! Now, let’s move out!” The first shot fired was from the Omega Tanks Omega Cannon. It was totally Omega. It was shot near the bottom of the Tower. The whole tower shuddered with the impact, and a huge hole was made in the tower. Body parts could be seen flying every-which way. No sooner than was the shot fired, a small group of General Guy’s and Goomboss’s troops rushed into the hole. Luckily, they weren’t noticed because of all the smoke and confusion. Inside the tower, the Shaman had felt the impact. “Send a group of Mages to the top to see what happened!” Merlee yelled. Mages at the top were sent to see, but as soon as they got to the top, a lot of them fell to the ground. Headshotted by the Sniper guys. Merlee was told all this by the remaining Mages. And so the battle had begun.
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Yeah, I know it was really short, but I didn’t want to go any farther without Merloo getting plans in.
Should I put the casualties up right now, or wait till the end?
Comments?
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Water Dumple
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Post by Water Dumple on Sept 25, 2008 16:13:57 GMT -5
Nice start. I mean, I don't know the situation or anything so I can't make a "Balanced review" and say what should and shouldn't happen, I can only comment on the writing, but I will say that it's quite good.
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kaka
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Post by kaka on Sept 25, 2008 16:24:50 GMT -5
Thx.
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Mr.Makutawsome
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Post by Mr.Makutawsome on Sept 25, 2008 17:18:10 GMT -5
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Post by tinfoilman on Sept 25, 2008 17:37:38 GMT -5
Thumbs up, dude!
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Post by vidguysteve on Sept 25, 2008 18:34:51 GMT -5
This is gonna RAWK! I can already tell!
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kaka
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Post by kaka on Sept 25, 2008 18:38:07 GMT -5
Well, I think I'm not going to get plans from Merloo anytime soon, with his predicament.
Not that what's happening with him's a bad thing.
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